Added: Nov 18, 2008
From: jobros345
Duration: 1:32
Hey everyone hope you like it!! see video for what they look like, the home and everything ! Kelsie Daniels, Also known as " goodie two shoes " . But Kelsie hid true self behind this " sweet " person . It was a hot summer day in august. Kelise, Alyssa ( AN: Kelise's Sister), and their mom Lisa, were moving into a new home that day, Kelsie took a deep breathe & walked in. Kelsie : hey mom .. Lisa : Kelise! * hugs her tightly * Kelsie: okay then .. Kelise walked over to a clean glass table with pictures on it. There in a frame was a picture of her mom, Alyssa, & her dad.. Micheal. Suddenly she felt her legs go weak & she slipped into a flashback. December 21st. Just a few days before christmas, Kelsie, Alyssa & her mom were sitting on the couch nervously. When they heard a LOUD knock on their door, Lisa slowly got up & stepped outside, While Kelise & Alyssa Scurried to their rooms where they heard screams & yells. Turns out that Micheal had been going out to the bar all week & Lisa was furious ! so thats why they moved .. Lisa: KELSIE! * shaking her * Kelise: huh ? oh ya. hi . Lisa: hmph.. im going up to my room be good ;) * kisses Kelsie's forehead * Kelsie threw herself on the couch, and rubbed her eyes. The door rang and she moaned " ERR. what now !- " she thought. She opened the door, her eyes widened, and she smiled. Kelsie : uhm, hi ? ???: .. woaah. i mean, HI . Kelsie: .. come in :) Joe: Thank you. My name is Joe by the way. Kelise swirved around examining Joe. He had Black pants with a Gold jacket, " gee, he is CUTE ! " Kelise said melting. Joe tried to make it look like he wasn't too intrested in Kelsie, even though he felt the complete opposite. Joe * sitting on the couch * so yeah, im your new neighbour . Kelise: REALLY ?! .. i mean, thats cool. Kelsie blushed as Joe chuckled.Joe: so, you like basketball, hey ?Kelsie: yupyup =)Joe: haha, I dont think im good.. But there have been tons of rumours around these parts that you are the best in the country!Kelsie: ha, well i guess i am okay, But i dont think im best in the country!Joe: * grabbing her hand * Well you are for sure the prettiest in the country.Kelsie was turning scarlet!, when Alyssa walked down the stairs, Alyssa flashed them a wide bright grin. Joe & Kelsie looked down and saw they were still holding hands, they quickly detached.Joe: so, uhm, this must be alyssa?Alyssa: yeah the one and only. * poses *Joe: haha, okay. well do you guys want to meet the rest of my family?Kelsie nodded while Alyssa squealed.Kelsie rolled her eyes at her sister while she walked out of the house with Joe beside her.5 subsribers & i post another :) please comment & tell me what you think =)
Channel: Entertainment
Tags: brothers joe jonas love notes series web
Rating: 5.00 (1 ratings) Views: 159' favoriteCount='1 Comments: 4
cutiegeneral3232 Says:
Nov 18, 2008 - really good start i like how u gave me some back ground info right from the start and the only thing to work on is making sure the audience understands who's talking other than that the story was FANTASTIC i'll keep giving feedback if you want it
jobros345 Says:
Nov 18, 2008 - okay thanks! people dont really comment that much anymore :( , I need some way to get people to read my stories. hmm :|
cutiegeneral3232 Says:
Nov 18, 2008 - well to do that maybe u could try to get your name advertised by people, check out the story "reality can't compare" and see if she will advertise ur story i love her stories but don't forget to ask me when i'm not in a rush about people who advertise lots of stories...i know tons but i'm like gunna be late fur school.....oh joy*she said in a sarcastic voice*
jobros345 Says:
Nov 18, 2008 - Guuys. comment & sub pleaaaaaaaaase !